Archive for March, 2010

sex, drugs, and ya

March 31, 2010

So, I was talking to @Sparrowbug on twitter the other day about the responsibilities of YA writers in terms of content.

She was voicing her opinion about the fact that underage drinking and even drinking and driving seem to be given the ‘okay’ in some YA novels.  The characters seem to not care and/or there are no consequences for the behavior. 

I agree that is pretty crappy, but at the same time, is it authentic?  Where do you draw the line?  If it fits your character to drink or do other naughties and not face consequences, do you forgo that for your own sense of moral obligation?

I really don’t know the answer.  On one hand, I know that my parents were very present and waiting up for me when I got home every night.  Therefore, I didn’t drink in high school despite my friends doing, seeing it on TV, reading it in books, etc.  So that side of me thinks you write what is right (fun with homophones) for your story.

On the other hand, I know my parents were awesome and not everyone has that.  Also, some kids are just more rebellious by nature and will do what they want to do regardless (though I still think parenting comes into play).  This side of me thinks we need to be very cognizant of the words/ideas that we are passing on to our readers.

So as writers, how do we approach these subjects?  Do we strive for complete authenticity or do we try to work in some personal responsibilities (not preachy) into our writing?

A slippery slope.

I’m at the point in my WIP where I have to begin building a futuristic world and society.  I’m finding it difficult, even though I’m not making crazy changes (there are no snarlufugus furried beasts that I’ve created or anything).

I guess what I’m finding difficult is not so much describing what I’m seeing in my head, but I keep asking myself, “does this sound stupid?”

I’m sure it is because of my insecurities more than anything else, but I’m anxious about eventually giving it to betas and finding out that I totally blew it.

I think it’s making me even more nervous because I totally see this society building in my brain and I want to do it justice.

As if the blogging gods heard my prayers, I stumbled about Janice Hardy’s blog series specifically dealing with world building in your writing.

So far, she’s talked about (using construction metaphors):

The Foundation

Putting Up the Walls

Building Out the Rooms

Painting

Showing It Off

If you are having to world build, what are you finding particularly difficult?

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March 23, 2010

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My old laptop died a slow death at the hands of a Coca-Cola a few months back (which I now realize was October – I can’t believe I’ve gone this long without a personal computer), so my husband and I decided to bite the bullet and get the 27″ iMac for both writing and photography purposes.

It’s large.  It’s in charge.  It’s awesome.

Let me count the ways of its awesomeness.

First, the monitor is HUGE.  Gargantuan.  Massive.  Did I mention huge?

This is great for a lot of reasons.  Number one, I can edit pictures a lot more effectively as I can actually SEE all the details.  Love it.

Secondly, I can really get a better picture of what my WIP looks like on a larger scale.  Example:

Lastly, I can do this (please ignore the messy room):

and this:

Awesome, right?

and the winner is…

March 16, 2010

Over the last week, I held my first ever contest. Can I say just how much I enjoyed doing this? First of all, every entry was so great and I just had fun reading them. Secondly, I just liked doing it. :D

I know that I am so glad I didn’t have to judge these because I still haven’t picked a favorite. Good thing I picked a judge that developed a system!

First, the poll winner. I asked for public votes over the weekend and this person wins a $15 gift certificate to Amazon. With 33% of the vote, the winner is:

CLAIRE GILLIAN!

Congrats!

And for the judged portion, I was given an overall winner, plus two honorable mentions. The overall winner will receive a $25 gift certificate to Amazon.

First, the HONORABLE MENTIONS, with comments:

Madeleine

“You’ve got to pee before you can zip up your pants.”
Great opening line.

Krista

“My mother’s mouth turned down everytime she saw a cigarette dangling out of Jules heavily painted lips or my stringly hair stuffed into a dirty ball cap.”
This is the image that caught my attention. I’d enjoy reading closer to the opener.

And apparently, the public liked the same entry as my judge.  The OVERALL WINNER  is:

CLAIRE GILLIAN!

Here is what led to her selection (in the judge’s words):

“I judged the entries on a 5 point system using four categories.  I was judging on unique premise, writing voice, the hook, and a desire to keep reading.  

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Claire: It lost a little in the points for premise because of the vampire theme, but it did very well in all the other categories.  Her writing voice is clear and easy to follow.  The main character’s attitude and presence was immediate and I very much appreciated that.  It sucked me into the story quickly. – No pun intended. :) – I was interested to see where this story was going.
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Notes on the excerpt: I would suggest the author use this sentence for the opener… “I really don’t know why he bothered, why he hadn’t just killed me instead of leaving me this way.”
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I enjoyed the part about the shoes and think that might could happen sooner in the opener.
Her premise is good, but the vampire thing would make me groan a bit if I were picking this off the shelf.  However, Claire’s description of where the book is going sounds interesting.  So if she can get to those plot points fast, I think it would be very helpful.”
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I want to thank everyone who took the time to enter!  This was fun!  So much fun, I might just have to do it again. 
Claire, I will send your gift certificates to the e-mail you entered, unless you tell me another one you’d like it sent to. :-)

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March 16, 2010

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cast your vote

March 14, 2010

There were some awesome entries into my contest!  Thanks guys! 

I love beginnings, so it was fun to see all of the different approaches. 

Encourage your friends and whoever to come read the entries and vote!

Come back on Tuesday evening to see the two prize winners (judges pick and poll winner).  The poll will be closed on Tuesday at noon. You can only vote once per day (per computer)!

CLICK TO READ ALL ENTRIES!

Good luck!!

eyeitis

March 12, 2010

So, I’ve hit the half-way mark of my WIP and have moved beyond that hump, so I’m starting to think about the end.  Not of my life, but the end of this draft.  I’m look forward to the editing sometimes and then sometimes, I’m not at all.

Reasons why I am looking forward to it:

A) I am going to buy a nifty corkboard and colored note cards.  I don’t know what I’m going to DO with said items, but I thought it would make me look cool.

B) I already know things that need to be changed, but I’m just waiting until I get to the end before I start messing with stuff.  But those things are nagging me, so I’m ready for that.  I just don’t want to spend a bunch of time messing with a scene just to have it cut later or something.

Now, why I’m NOT looking forward to editing.

A) I have eyeitis.  It’s all about the eyes.  When I do Find & Replace, it’s going to tell me there are a million ‘eyes’ in my story.  I just know it. 

B) I also have weak-verbitis.  Every time I type a ‘walked’ or a ‘looked’, I cringe because I know I’m going to have to go back and change it when I’m editing, but I’m trying not to focus on that stuff with the first run.

So what are your ailments that make you nervous about the editing process?  Or are you totally stoked and already have your colored note cards lined up on your nightstand ready and waiting?

And don’t forget about  the CONTEST!  I’m not a huge blog, so your chances of winning are pretty high!

my first contest

March 9, 2010

I’m feeling happy and giving tonight, so I thought I’d host a contest!  My real-life buddy just ran an AWESOME one on finding inspiration and I would have entered if I hadn’t already owned the prize. ;-)  BTW, if you don’t have The 3 A.M. Epiphany, check it out.  Regan (the aforementioned friend) bought it for me when she first heard I was starting to write and it has awesome exercises in it.  Yes, she’s an awesome friend, in case you were wondering.

Now, the contest.

I am sucker for novel beginnings, so I thought I’d cater to that since…well…it’s my contest and I’ll do what I want to.

WHAT DO YOU NEED TO DO?

  • First: Follow me on twitter because I want followers, what can I say?   Like I said…my contest…my rules! :D I say SUPER insightful stuff every day.  Okay, not really, but I’m a nice girl!  If you don’t have Twitter, don’t worry about it (or if you are super picky about who you follow, that’s fine, too – I won’t tar and feather your entry).

 

  • Second: Enter the title and up to the first 250 words of a WIP into the comments section of this post.  Please only enter once!  You are welcome to give a small blurb about the plot after your entry if you want.  It might help to mention the genre, too.  Make sure you include a real e-mail address because that is how you will receive your prize!

You have until Saturday night (March 13, 2010) at 11:59 EST to enter.  Entries after that not be entered.

WHAT DO YOU WIN?

I’ll have two winners.

  • The first winner will be selected by some unbiased writerly friends whom I’ve asked to judge.  That person will win a $25 gift card to Amazon*.  This way it’s not just my opinion that counts.

 

  • The second winner will come from a public poll.  It will begin Sunday, March 14, 2010 at noon.  It will close Tuesday, March 16, 2010 at noon.  The winner of the public poll will win a $15 gift card to Amazon*.

Both winners will be announced Tuesday, March 16th.  It will probably be in the evening.

Spread the word! 

*If you are morally opposed to Amazon or something, I can do one to an online book store of your choice, just let me know.

This contest is approved by my cutie-patootie son in his Easter outfit:

i’ve been boring

March 3, 2010

I really haven’t had a lot to say lately. *hears collective gasps from anyone who knows me in real life*

But, I AM writing, which is a yay moment.  Can I get a woot-woot?  Bueller?  Bueller? Anyone? 

I really do see light at the end of the tunnel and I can’t wait to start editing!  I sent my first ten pages to Weronika Janczuk and I kind of had to laugh when I read it back over.  Apparently, I was a fan of adverbs when I started writing VINTAGE.  So yeah, I’ll be fixing those.

Lastly, be sure to enter my friend Regan’s contest!!!!!!!  The book she’s offering up to the winner is a great help.  She bought it for me at the vveerryyy beginning of my journey and I really have appreciated it.

I had an awesome picture of a blue ribbon winning pickle (contest, get it?) I was going to add, but Getty Images is being dumb.  Try to get a mental image because it was an awesome picture.

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