Comments on: a halloween story http://www.amandaplavich.com/2009/10/19/a-halloween-story/ a writer's blog Fri, 23 Dec 2011 21:22:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Amanda Plavich http://www.amandaplavich.com/2009/10/19/a-halloween-story/comment-page-1/#comment-45 Amanda Plavich Thu, 22 Oct 2009 15:25:51 +0000 http://www.amandaplavich.com/?p=108#comment-45 I know, I had that info in there, but then had to start cutting words to get it down to 500! lol I told ya it was rough. : -P I know, I had that info in there, but then had to start cutting words to get it down to 500! lol I told ya it was rough. : -P

]]> By: Julie http://www.amandaplavich.com/2009/10/19/a-halloween-story/comment-page-1/#comment-44 Julie Thu, 22 Oct 2009 14:39:06 +0000 http://www.amandaplavich.com/?p=108#comment-44 Cool story. Some questions unanswered though... I wanted to know how the 16-year old died in the cemetary. You teased us then never went back to it. Boo hoo! Cool story. Some questions unanswered though… I wanted to know how the 16-year old died in the cemetary. You teased us then never went back to it. Boo hoo!

]]> By: Amanda Plavich http://www.amandaplavich.com/2009/10/19/a-halloween-story/comment-page-1/#comment-39 Amanda Plavich Wed, 21 Oct 2009 12:25:14 +0000 http://www.amandaplavich.com/?p=108#comment-39 You know, I think you are right! That would fix the stuff that was bugging me most. Good suggestion, I appreciate it!! And it is! Ding-ding-ding! I loved that show. This was from my favorite episode. :-P You know, I think you are right! That would fix the stuff that was bugging me most. Good suggestion, I appreciate it!!

And it is! Ding-ding-ding! I loved that show. This was from my favorite episode. :-P

]]> By: Donna http://www.amandaplavich.com/2009/10/19/a-halloween-story/comment-page-1/#comment-38 Donna Wed, 21 Oct 2009 00:22:26 +0000 http://www.amandaplavich.com/?p=108#comment-38 Very cool draft! I'd like to see where you take it in the edits! In my opinion, I'd recommend a little less info from her POV, maybe switch to third and make it a little more vague. It's creepier if the reader doesn't know too much, but just enough. And why do I think that that picture is from an episode of Are You Afraid of the Dark?? Very cool draft! I’d like to see where you take it in the edits! In my opinion, I’d recommend a little less info from her POV, maybe switch to third and make it a little more vague. It’s creepier if the reader doesn’t know too much, but just enough.

And why do I think that that picture is from an episode of Are You Afraid of the Dark??

]]> By: Regan Leigh http://www.amandaplavich.com/2009/10/19/a-halloween-story/comment-page-1/#comment-37 Regan Leigh Wed, 21 Oct 2009 00:07:21 +0000 http://www.amandaplavich.com/?p=108#comment-37 I would venture a guess... but you already told me. ;) I would venture a guess… but you already told me. ;)

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